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  1. OrangeAipom

    The Spriter's Showcase!

    aaa the shell shape sucks
  2. OrangeAipom

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    The problem is that I don't know what shape it should be. *rolls eyes*
  3. OrangeAipom

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    But if I make it thinner, then it won't match the other flipper.
  4. OrangeAipom

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    All I did was c/p Manaphy's arm and made it a bit wider.
  5. OrangeAipom

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    I think the swearing was a bit unneeded, but still.
  6. OrangeAipom

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    Where on its left flipper is it too blocky?
  7. OrangeAipom

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    I know I haven't shaded the flippers yet, but I think there's something wrong with their outline. I'm not sure what, though.
  8. OrangeAipom

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    I thought reverse-dots was the original outline style. O_o Anyone can draw. That being said, not everyone can draw well, and not everyone can sprite well. I like spriting more than drawing, because I can't edit drawings to be flawless. I draw more, though, because I can't sprite in class.
  9. OrangeAipom

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    What does dithering your shading have to do with choppy lines? O_o That is, unless you're talking about the reverse-dot shading on Dragonfree's sprite tutorial. I don't think you've attempted that right, since it looks weird on a dark background. Maybe you should try a different style of...
  10. OrangeAipom

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    It looks like it has one front leg instead of two.
  11. OrangeAipom

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    For the werewolf, I think you should copy and paste a second one, remove the antialias, shade it, and then add it back on, looking at the first one.
  12. OrangeAipom

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    It looks weird with its eyes looking at nothing instead of what it's leaping at. If anything, you should change that. I think you should put the arms in front of the cat instead of to the sides so that it doesn't look like it's doing the splits. I'll discuss shading later, because it'll be too...
  13. OrangeAipom

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    I think you should move up the red number so it matches up with the attack's name.
  14. OrangeAipom

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    The tail looks too much like Ponyta's. Maybe you should get rid of it and replace it with Eevee's tail. You could give that fire too if you like. I made another edit on my sprite: Which is better?
  15. OrangeAipom

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    No, it's supposed to me a mix of alternate color Mareep, Luxray, Electrike, and Joteon. It's not good that you can't tell which Pokemon, since Luxray is pretty obvious, I think. Edited a few things.
  16. OrangeAipom

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    You should try to fix the proportions while looking at RS/FL Vulpix instead of DP Vulpix because the pose is easier to work with, especially with the tails. I think that the last Kanto gym leader person, however his name's spelt, should have eyes. Lt. Surge's hair shading doesn't make any...
  17. OrangeAipom

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    What's the Scyther thing? The Weezing/Torkoal's black rocks look weird because the red parts have more shades. The Umbreon's hind leg is shadded funny. I don't know why, but it just looks fake. Yeah, the Flygon/Rayquaza things are a bit lacking. Maybe you could give Dragonite Flygon's knee...
  18. OrangeAipom

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    What Sonic sprite did you use to shade the Sandslash?
  19. OrangeAipom

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    What did you revamp from?
  20. OrangeAipom

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    Maybe you should change Chimchar's hand so that it's in a fist.
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